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  1. September 2nd, 2009 02:17 PM #1
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    Icon32 ~!!~ Rabba kar ik dua kabool meri te ~!!~


    Rabba kar ik dua kabool meri te,
    Tu kadi meri suni nahi, mera eh bharam tod de.
    Jehri tod k gayi har rishta mere ton,
    Ohdi yaad mere aakhri saah naal jod de.
    bhavein dil dukhda ae beshak
    Par ohnu yaad karan ch sakoon bahut hai,
    har bol jhootha pai gya mera
    Mai kehnda hunda c tainu haasal kar loon
    Mere ch janoon bahut hai..
    ik ohdi mazboori ne mere saare supne tod te,
    Jehri tod gayi har rishta mere ton,
    Ohdi yaad mere aakhri saah naal jod de...
    Bai k jes bohar hethaan,
    Os naal khawab sajaaya karda si,
    Fer darr k judaai de darr ton,
    Ohnu ghutt seene naal laya karda si.
    Ajj kambh jaandi ae rooh tak meri
    Nere jaande os bohar de,
    Jehri tod gayi har risha JOT ton,
    Ohdi yaad mere aakhri saah naal jod de    ..
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  2. September 2nd, 2009 03:10 PM #2
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    Default Re: ~!!~ Rabba kar ik dua kabool meri te ~!!~

    nancy...

    what you wrote here is wonderful.....


    ............ jogi buaey uttey dho lagaya baitha vey, sohniyoji
    tey aakh da jaunda vey lakeera.N padhda jaunda vey
    sunn leye Sohniyoji, saddi na leye khabar koe te khair rubb de
    tere munn de murada.N Sohniyoji, assa rubb kolo lard key ve mangiyaji.... !!!!
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  3. September 2nd, 2009 03:20 PM #3
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    Default Re: ~!!~ Rabba kar ik dua kabool meri te ~!!~

    thanx Rose ji
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    Teri dosti da main satkar kitta,
    Teri har nazar nu main pyar kitta,
    Kasam rabb di na bhula devin is dosti nu,
    Main apne to vi jyada is rishte te aitbaar kitta
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  4. September 2nd, 2009 03:30 PM #4
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    Default Re: ~!!~ Rabba kar ik dua kabool meri te ~!!~

    ja vey mahiya tere gala batta jhuute ,
    assa de kadey ve tu khabar aapo na leyte
    shaam vele aaya vey kis kis de leyn khabar ....
    mardey mardey jivey assa pavey
    jeundey jeundey mar leye addhey
    chitte tera patra padh leya bahutera
    aan hua tera bheje jado'N taar naal khabar ...............
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  5. September 2nd, 2009 03:36 PM #5
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    Default Re: ~!!~ Rabba kar ik dua kabool meri te ~!!~

    Dil kisay dee yaad vich rondi rehi,
    Daag apnay dil day main dhondi rehi,

    Tur paye oh aun gay main taangh vich,
    Ghar daa booha kholda dhondi rehi,

    Ikk pall vee mil na sakiyaa dil nu chain,
    Gamm dee chakki umar bhar jhondi rehi,

    Hijjar vich hanjhu hee main kerey nhi,
    Khoon see nainaa chon jo chondi rehi,

    Ikk pall vee na eh hassiya gareeb,
    Terey gamm vich tadphdi rondi rehi.
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    Default Re: ~!!~ Rabba kar ik dua kabool meri te ~!!~

    aavo ji sohniyoji, pal pal rasta assa taq diyaji
    kolo lang diya dil jaldaji hun tey vekh vekh loka nu hansdey gaateyji...)
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    Har janam tu hovegi khwaish meri,
    har janam hovegi mera pyar tu..
    Is janam v tera intjar reha,
    agle janam v hovegi mera intjar tu......
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    Default Re: ~!!~ Rabba kar ik dua kabool meri te ~!!~

    ek'o ek naa.M usda pyasa halak vich ruukya
    jey pani piva.N jey tukk nigla pehle pehle usda naa.M chakha...!
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    Default Re: ~!!~ Rabba kar ik dua kabool meri te ~!!~

    nancy ji
    osma words dear
    yaar kaha se likh lia ye sab
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    Default Re: ~!!~ Rabba kar ik dua kabool meri te ~!!~

    thanx ashu ji
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    Pata nahi yaaro ki mainu hoiya
    Ajj tapp tapp athru vagde ne
    Jo yaar de giya si mainu shayid
    Oh zakham ajj risde lagde ne


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